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Many of us define a paragraph
in terms of length like - a paragraph is a group of at least five sentences, a
paragraph is half a page long, etc.
• In reality, though, the unity and coherence of ideas among sentences is what constitutes a paragraph.
1. Topic sentence
§ Usually the first sentence of a paragraph
§ States the main idea of the paragraph
§ Anchors the paragraph as all other sentences of the
paragraph add to the topic sentence
2. Supporting sentences
· Supporting sentence 1
· Supporting sentence 2
· Supporting sentence 3
3. Concluding sentence
Topic sentence = top bun
Supporting sentences = Fillings that make
the burger tasty
Concluding sentence = bottom bun
When we look at the above images of burgers, we can see that only the top and bottom buns are common. The stuffing is arranged differently but still the burgers taste good. Unfortunately if the order of the connecting sentences is changed, the paragraph will not be great.
· Unity,
· Order of sentences and
· Coherence
Unity
Every paragraph
should be about a single, specific idea with every single supporting sentence
adding to the idea of the topic sentence. A paragraph begins with a topic
sentence which presents the topic or the main idea of the paragraph. Every
sentence that follows the topic sentence must support the idea set out by the
topic sentence. The supporting sentences should NOT introduce a new topic or
new idea.
Order of sentences
Ø His wife is a doctor.
Ø I live in Gandhi Nagar.
Ø Mr. Abhinav is my next door neighbor.
Ø Mr. Abhinav and his family are my good friends.
Ø He is an officer in the government.
These five sentences
need to be rearranged in proper sequence to make a great meaningful
paragraph. The following is the correct order of sentences.
Ø I live in Gandhi Nagar.
Ø Mr. Abhinav is my next door neighbor.
Ø He is an officer in the government.
Ø His wife is a doctor.
Ø Mr.
Abhinav and his family are my good friends.
Coherence
Every paragraph should be about a single, specific idea with every single supporting sentence adding to the idea of the topic sentence. A paragraph begins with a topic sentence which presents the topic or the main idea of the paragraph. Every sentence that follows the topic sentence must support the idea set out by the topic sentence. The supporting sentences should NOT introduce a new topic or new idea.
Order of sentences
Ø His wife is a doctor.
Ø I live in Gandhi Nagar.
Ø Mr. Abhinav is my next door neighbor.
Ø Mr. Abhinav and his family are my good friends.
Ø He is an officer in the government.
These five sentences need to be rearranged in proper sequence to make a great meaningful paragraph. The following is the correct order of sentences.
Ø I live in Gandhi Nagar.
Ø Mr. Abhinav is my next door neighbor.
Ø He is an officer in the government.
Ø His wife is a doctor.
Ø Mr.
Abhinav and his family are my good friends.
Coherence
A paragraph is said
to be coherent when every sentence flow smoothly one after the other. The
sentences must not stand alone or deviate away from the topic of the paragraph.
Read the following paragraph:
Ø I love my
grandmother. My grandmother is very old. She lives with us. She used to work as
a teacher. I love all my teachers. I have learnt a lot from my grandmother. She
taught me how to button my shirt and comb my hair. Her students love and
respect her. She taught English language. I enjoy her cooking.
The first sentence of the above paragraph
is a strong topic sentence. We can see that sentence no. 5 deviates from the
topic and if it is removed we get a great coherent paragraph.
Ø I love my
grandmother. My grandmother is very old. As
she lives with us, I enjoy her company. She used to work as a teacher of
English. Her students love and respect her. I have learnt a lot from my
grandmother. She taught me how to button my shirt and comb my hair. Moreover, she is a good cook. I enjoy her cooking.
Note the use of transition words as and moreover.
*A great paragraph must have a Topic Sentence and a concluding sentence.*A great paragraph will have proper order of sentences and coherence.
Read : How to achieve coherence in your writing - with Transitional Expressions as bridges
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